Pitfall's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Maschine.]

Too distorted in my opinion. Otherwise, pretty good.

At least it wasn't swallowed up by bass.

Also, it was weird how some parts seemed off beat

[Cloudline WIP]

Dance or Trance. For some reason a LOT of peeps get those two mixed up with techno.

Also this song is very fun and dancy. I like it!

Lockyn responds:

I'm not too sure about trance, as most I've heard have very heavy basslines. I'll change it to dance :)

Thanks so much for reviewing! FUNDANCEFUNDANCE haha

[crystalize]

Okay, well in music there's what's called a drop. Yours came in at 1:45. That's too long for an intro to a 4 min song, usually. However, the actual dance part of the song is quite fun, as well as catchy. You have good fills at the ends of your loop sets, but you probably need more drum fills to have variety. Maybe for the ending you might even wanna add an echo to the end of the song.

Also, you probably shouldn't put this in the techno genre, it's fine with tags, but I'd say that it's more dance. than anything, maybe a hint of trance. Trance-dance? Whatever. Decent song, I'd say, though.

7/10 :)

killapickle1 responds:

thanks, i appreciate the criticism :). i think the reason why i tend to do long intros is because i have listened to (and played) rock music quite a bit and a lot of rock songs tend to have longer intros. songs like cliffs of dover for example. its more a personal preference for me to have long intros so i can understand it when someone who has listened to electronic music for awhile would be put off a bit by it (since electronic songs tend to have 30-45 second intros). thanks again for the criticism, it is well appreciated :)

[Calliope]

51 times in a row

[Madness 4]

How dare you forget about the best song ever.

[IR - Cogs 'n Bolts]

Love dis

Indigorain responds:

Thanks!

[Girl chased by Monster]

Dude. Omfg. This is awesome.

Don't change anything about your style, it's great.

[*- Pokémon DancemiX -*]

how is this pokemon?

Jebbal responds:

It's a remix of a pokemon song, go youtube it!

Thanks for the review!

[Pokémon Be Dubstepp'en!!]

nostalgia boner